This is a pretty good poem. I really like it. Uhm, about a year ago I went through a deppression and thought like that a lot, and I just want to tell you, don't hurt yourself or anything because I'm sure it'll get Job!Starr

I loved the idea of this poem! You have some catchy phrases, too: "I try too hard, yet not enough". However, you might wanna work on the meter. Othere than that, AWESOME!

hey u eva hurt urself im gona have 2 kill you coz ur a heck of a poetry writer.
i do hope u'll be ok, coz no one deserves going through depression or even saddness. its not worth living life being a wreck, your alive oz ur meant to be, and coz ur meant to have fun no matter what gets chucked at u.
i guess i cant really say much coz im not in ur position wateva it is, and im obviously not u.
just no that im sure whoeva reads this will back you up and will be there 4 u.
goodluck in life.

ahh i like it. its really good :)

It's awesome katie ! YOU RULE

Very good! i feel like that some days. Strange all of the poems i've read about tonight, hav delt w/ killin' yourself.

wow...that was excellent...i feel so special...WHY WONT ANYONE READ MY PRETTY POEM?