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| erasmuss 2008-01-02 ch 5,  | abuseI read this stroy and go WHOO! Then I look at the date of last update and am like... Oh brillaint. 8 FRIKKIN YEARS AGO. Oh well. Too bad for me. |
| blackrose214 2007-12-21 ch 5, | abuseHey there. I like this story a lot and I`d be thrilled if you`d ontinue it. soon maybe? You`re doing a great job here. :D |
| the pirateKing 2007-06-25 ch 5, | abuseI'm sure you have enough reviews for this story, haha, but I think you need another one! I just wanna say that this is one of the best stories that I've read. Actually, no, that's not all I wanna say. I also want to say that you should keep writing this story. And...that's it? Hopefully this is the review that helps you post the next chapter?? If you need support, it's all right here! Please keep writing! |
| Redemmo 2007-05-04 ch 5, | abuseI am really enjoying this story - the characters have a lot of depth and are very believable. Just a small critique - the text in your last chapter is centerized instead of left-aligned and is somewhat annoying. I am really looking forward to the next chapter and I intend to check out your other stories as well. Keep up the great work! ~Redemmo |
| Lady E 2007-04-30 ch 5, | abuseThis is a piece of sheer, sheer beauty, flawlessly written and incredibly mysterious characters. Addicting to say the least. I am willing to risk coming across as an annoying ** and clamor for an update, however unlikely after this much time. This is much too wonderful of a story to be given up. Favorites without question. |
| H.f.M. 2007-03-23 ch 5, anon. | abuseI love this story... I am sorry that it took me this long to find. Is there more? |
| UnfortunateFortunate 2006-02-18 ch 5, | abuseUpdate soon! It's a great story! |
| MissQuackQuack-and-Fuji 2005-08-12 ch 5, | abuseYay. I like it! I can't wait for you to update. |
| Tenn 2005-05-26 ch 5, | abuseOhh, you've got to crank out a miraculous update now! This is the awesome! The epitome of awesomeness, or maybe cruelty, that you haven't updated. |
| LucifersDarkChild 2005-04-15 ch 5, | abuseI stand corrected. That was mean, and you know it. Ah well, cant wait for the next chappie! We get it soon, right? Right?! RIGHT?! |
| LucifersDarkChild 2005-04-15 ch 4, | abuseWorst, ending, ever. Okay, yeah, I stole it from the comic book dude from The Simpsons, but ITS TRUE! T-T -tears- Its one of the worst cliffies I've read! "worst" as in suckiness that I have to wait and read! |
| LucifersDarkChild 2005-04-15 ch 3, | abuse-purrs- As I was reading this, I noticed a resmblance to my character Dino and Lucian. Dino isn't in one of my originals; well, he is and he isn't. He's going to be in a story that I'm not going to post on fp.c. No, I'm going to send it straight to the presses. Hm, still need to pick a pen name... Anyway, Dino and Lucian are alot alike. However, Dino shows a whole lot more emotion that Lucian does, but that doesn't matter because they both rule. |
| LucifersDarkChild 2005-04-15 ch 2, | abuse-more droolage- I shouldn't even have to go on. I mean, with a review. With the story its is a definate "YES!" |
| LucifersDarkChild 2005-04-15 ch 1, | abuse-droolage- And that's all I have to say. :3 |
| Kat 2005-03-16 ch 5, anon. | abuseAWESOME STORY! That is one of the best stories I have read in a long time. I LOVE your writing style, it's very amazing. Can't wait for you to update. |