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| Lynn's Love 2006-06-10 ch 9, | abuseOh god, you're making me cry! That was so sad. Someone really had it in for Cody, don't they? I love it. |
| Teen Advocate 2006-04-05 ch 9, | abuseMY INSIDES ARE CRYING! I lost a boyfriend to lukemia...so yea, i guess I identify. I officially love you for your writing talent and your morbid endings... |
| Shadesome 2005-12-11 ch 9, | abuseI'm crying right now! That ending was so sad! so random. it didn't fit. I mean, oh! wHY?! I'm so sad now! such a wondeful story. |
| Abigale Snitche 2005-05-10 ch 9, | abuseOh my gosh, beautiful plotline, the beginning felt a bit rushed, like they only knew eachother for a short while and then they were in love, but it was sort of explained with Cody having moved around constantly and Johnny's "abuse", so I assumed it was their lack of affection and love along with their mutual attraction and trust that caused the bond. I'm VERY upset by the ending, I didn't cry, I got all choked up. It was very sad, really deep. I especially liked the mentioning of how they never got to explore their love but he still had memories of Johnny and that was all anyone really needed. You really ought to do a bit of a sequel to this, maybe Cody falling in love again and going to Johnny's grave to ask for permission. But then I get all mad because Cody and Johnny should be together, I really can't see Cody ever truly falling in love truly, madly deeply with anyone else.Quicky question, it sorta seemed like someone other than them caused the accident...perhaps Cody's father?But really, I liked the quirks of the story, very cute humour (albeit slightly morbid, but then, you should read my own stuff) over all I truly enjoyed reading 'Lost in What I Found' On a side note, I also found the title incredibly appropriate. I look forward to reading more of your writing. Lots of love,Abi SnitcheAuthor of 'Veritas' |
| Spaz inc 2005-02-27 ch 9, | abuseI really liked the story, although i hated the ending of it. but, hey i've never even finished one of my stories cause they all suck. yet yours was really good. |
| lilleo 2004-12-18 ch 9, | abusejohnny dies... well iwa snt expecting that. well written but i didnt want him to die :( espesh when it was going so well |
| Naomi Schemer 2004-09-16 ch 9, | abuseso he died? thats it? he just died? i didnt want that to happen. i wanted them to live happily ever after, and it went so good. i just didnt want him to die. well, your a great author, and i cant say i didnt like this story, because its awsome (even though the way they talked was kinda unrealistic). i want to see more of your stuff, so i'll check your bio, ja ne. |
| Raven-ember 2004-07-29 ch 9, | abuseOMG,*tears streaming down face* that's so not fair! That sucks! Why did Johny have to die, you already killed Cody's sister! That part made me cry too! It was very well written!*wipes tears* You did an amazing job with the character and the story! It was very emotional! I really enjoyed reading it! |
| Ilana 2004-06-15 ch 9, anon. | abuseOMG! That's soo not fair! You can't do that. You nearly made me cry! |
| Appleofdeadfish554 2004-05-31 ch 9, | abuseyou need to watch your speeling and punctuation other than that it was a beautiful storie you suprised me in the end... |
| Snowy 2004-03-20 ch 9, anon. | abuseThe whole story was perfect, except for the ending. All the stories I've been reading lately end up with someone dying. Try something happy next time, it would make me feel better o.O;. The ending felt rushed too. If you're going to kill such a cool guy, give him a proper death sequence. Oh well, good job anyway ^^. Ciao! ~*~Snowy~*~ |
| lCiel 2004-02-09 ch 9, anon. | abuseI AM SO GOING TO KILL YOU FOR KILLING JOHNNY! mark my words! in other words: I LOVED your story. the characters had so much passion and feelings in them. congrats! l'Ciel (find my account on fanfiction.net) |
| Ida 2004-01-29 ch 9, anon. | abuse~cries~ |
| AngelOfMusic387 2004-01-10 ch 9, | abuseThat was a really good story. Finding love like that is a very special thing. The ending was very sad, though. You should write a sequal. It would be very interesting to see how Cody deals with the loss of Johnny and possibly learns how to love again. It would also be interesting to see what happens to Cody's real dad. He should be put in jail or something. Consider it. Nikki |
| ItalianQT 2003-10-17 ch 9, | abuseOMG!! That's extremely sad! You had me so close to tears! But your story was really well written! : ) |