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| Hannah 2002-08-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou have a band? You have a tape? Cooooolness! I must listen sometime. Anyway, I really like these. They most likely sound better to music -- they usually do -- but I really like the way you present what you're trying to say in beautifully written lyrics, and especially impressed by the fact that the rhymes make sense, and don't sound cheesy or predictable at all. That, and they all have the same sort of beat to them (duh, Hannah, it's for a song). I'm very, very impressed with these. Excellent. |
| Namidamei 2001-11-20 ch 1,  | abuseI'd love to hear these to music someday, imoutochan!! =D!! You write such beautiful lyrics..!!! I especially liked "Misunderstood". ^.^ |
| John T Carter 2001-10-07 ch 1, | abuseMisunderstood is a really good song, but I saw one line you might want to change a little "I can't even stand the feel of your eyes" Somehow it doesn't sound right compared to the other lines. I think you might have a good chance out in the music world!! I'm not a song writer, that's just my opinion! Good Luck!!! |