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| Anthiena 2007-08-23 ch 1,  | abuseI like this. It's like the 'Just Another Vampire' stories. You should do a novel collecting those as well. :D |
| foxboy321 2006-07-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseDamn! This is one hell of a good story. Creepy, I didn't expect the other scientist to be the one who had the pill . . . I like it. |
| unclepauly 2006-02-12 ch 1, | abuseI was just looking back through some of your old stories and I can barely believe what I'm reading! It's Brighton! |
| milrb5 2005-12-25 ch 1, anon. | abusePerfection willum. it was short but to the point. I enjoy every story I 've read of yours |
| Shadow-Love 2005-05-12 ch 1, | abuseGood story, i'm looking forward to the next chapter! |
| KC Nightingale 2005-04-18 ch 1, | abuseGood story, though i saw the warewolf thing coming it was still a good twist. Jolly good show. |
| sum nox 2005-02-13 ch 1, | abuseVery good! I especially like the ending! |
| custardpringle 2004-07-11 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. I like it. You made a nice choice in naming your villain, too. |
| Smarts 2004-04-15 ch 1, | abuseOh... Chilling. That was a good hooror chapter. Goodness gratiouos. Two go in and one come out. |
| Adrian Alvarez 2004-04-14 ch 1, | abuseWOW, what an amazing concept, I am thoroughly impressed! |
| Nickolaus Pacione 2004-04-12 ch 1, | abuseDamn. Basically the only thing I had to say about this because it is so frightening. It is one of your menacing writes here Will. Keep it up, you should send this one out. There is a contest on http://w.ebooksondisk.com, and you should write a story for it. I could see you actually making your way in there because a write like this, it would make you a writer to contend with. |
| princesss17 2004-01-29 ch 1, | abusewho is martha? is she his mother or something? i just love your stories |
| CobaltJewel 2004-01-11 ch 1, | abuseWell, it seems almost identical to Robin Cook's "Acceptible Risk". Otherwise it's pretty good. |
| IncanArticuno 2003-10-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is probably one of the best pieces of fiction I've seen here! Keep writing! |
| nothingish 2003-09-20 ch 1, | abusem...the taste of horror |