Yeah, this is a good poem.

Lyrical, well-structured, and the language sounded nice in my head. I read it out loud to myself, and it was even better.

Nicely done.

You're a wonderful writer! Great use of words...I can hardly believe you got it to rhyme; it has that mystic-like quality of a well-written free style, but has structure. Great job!
~God bless~

Drak, this was beautiful! I absolutely love it. Have you ever read Paradise Lost by Milton? If not.you really should. This was like a better version of it.

I thought it was a great poem. Good job, Drak!

niiiiiice. I like and yes it's all because you plugged in the irc chat. lol. No, i really liked it. Keep it up, -Ledzepfan