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| CelineDeLoup 2007-04-28 ch 1,  | abuseI love it. I've had my own crush on a teacher, and this just hit the nail on the head. Very good poem. JC |
| Innocent-Violets 2005-08-18 ch 1, | abuseThat's brill! Same as I feel except he's a teacher at another school... *sigh* 3 years already... Anyway, keep making great poems! |
| les petits bateaux 2005-06-02 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem and I agree with you, you can love whoever you want,true? And do you really have a crush on your teacher?:) Trinity Angelina Martinez |
| Story-Teller's Aide 2005-02-27 ch 1, | abuse:P Is that coming from you/? Or your imagination? |
| BlytheBee 2004-07-15 ch 1, | abuseWow, excellent poem. It sounds a lot like me... and strangely enough, some of my teachers are in their 40's too (or approaching). The student-teacher relationship is kind of a tragic one. In some cases you see your teachers more than you're own family... but you can't be close them. :( GREAT WORK! :D |
| horsegal-98 2004-05-15 ch 1, | abuseOOh, I like this because it supports my life dedication...only my teachers are all in their forties!! Anyways, I liked your undertone and your rhythm. Good work. |
| goddessofsnark 2003-05-01 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was awesome! I love this place, cause theres others like us here. This was so good! I love a lot, a lot a lot a lot, reminds me a lot of myself, very well written! kudos! |
| Purple Wobbly 2002-04-29 ch 1, | abuseGood stuff Sanomi!!! You closet weirdo you... I know what you were thinking when you wrote this.... I LIKE!!!! lol |
| The Haiku Police 2002-02-07 ch 1, | abuseThe first one is wrong. |
| reddragon21 2001-12-21 ch 1, | abusemwa ha ha ha ha! much it like i! about keys more write! SHINY BIG CAR KEEEEEYYYYYSSS! |
| Realist Ver1.01 2001-10-10 ch 1, | abuseYeah, I hate it when that happens, but I like this poem. |
| MsJadey 2001-10-09 ch 1, | abuseyou want to watch his slides again dont you!! you naughty girl O.o |