see we're not crazy.We just like fire!another wonderful exellent (gotta start using a new word) poem of yours!keep writing it keeps us going.

I really liked the way you arranged this poem. Very emotional.
-Quinney Cole

OH MY GOSH! I LOVE YOUR POEMS!! GRR!! I HATE YOU!! I wish i could write like that. This one I REALLY love as well. I like all of yours, but some i really love and this one is definitly a favorite

Great poem, filled with emotions and vivid pictures. I love it.

Oh god... I could almost cry. Beautiful imagery, feral and real and I can almost smell the smoke, you know that acrid smell right after you blow out a candle? I think I may go light one now.

i love fire. it's so warm... and alive. good job.

*Simply agrees with Tominator because she's reached that stage of the evening where she should really be in bed by now*

Nat that was just an amazing poem I love it. The best thing is the list of verbs which make it all seem like a sort of trance-like chant. IT really gives the impression of a burning ritual... Never stop writing for yourself and for all of us. I can really see the release of pain in the midst of inner pain in this poem.

you write exquisitely. I love it