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| .the twinkling of an eye 2005-05-29 ch 1,  | abuseThis is-- perfect. I never thought I'd say that about a rhyming poem, but the rhyme here was COMPLETELY unforced. However, I'd really think about changing one of the two "seen"s in verse three, the only palce i tripped in this piece. Other than that, all I can say is please think of sending this in for publication somehwere. (Just not poetry.com, that's a scam). This is a wonderful poem. Going in my profile as a link. Oksana =) |
| Haythaann 2003-12-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, I love this... Wow! |
| Ariana 2001-10-11 ch 1, | abusegreat!! Absolutely, 11/10 |
| archa 2001-10-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseFantastic...people can have that effect on us. |
| princess2 2001-10-10 ch 1, | abusehey, keep it up. i really like your work |