Great story. Constructive critisism[sp?], I think I got the wrong impression before the POV switch in ch1, because you kind of introduced some characters as if they were to be crucial to the storyline. Other than that, the only thing I wish was different was the odd marks instead of the desired special characters.

That was sooo good. I loved everything about this story because you made it sound pretty much believable. Awesome writing.

Hey, you know that I love this one! I am surprised I haven't left a review here yet. This piece is a really perfect example of the utter power of the written word. I imagine they could make a movie of this (except in the movie it'd be like in "Armageddon" and "Deep Impact" how they get saved at the last moment *lol*).

wow, i liked it. a lot. it's really good. quite vivid. scary, too.

That is good. It's soo vivid. It's scary!

Wow. This is REALLY good. Is that the end?

Hey, I really like this story. Is this the end? Are we left to imagine what happens next? And isn't "Kylian" the name of some irish beer?