I just realized that you like to write a lot of really depressing stuff. But thats what I like, things that can make me cry or remind me of sad memories. I love to cry over something I read or saw in a movie...*lol that's kinda weird I know but who gives a care* ;)

Amazing. Hope you got a good grade on this one.

That's really really sad.

Write more anyway~

~danielsgirl

My, what a twisted mind you have- all the better to twist yours with- nevermind, i'm a little weirder than usual today. Excellent, as always, and deligtfully deceptive- you had me going til the end about what was happening. This is probably too late for your assignment, i usually post mine after i get them back, and most of mine are usually for the school's literary magazine. It so funny, there's usually only a little clique of FFN authors and writers that do it, and the last issue in partiicular was fairly good too...Never mind, i'm babbling. Oh, and thanx for the review-TO

that wa really good!

I dunno if you've already turned this in, I hope you got a good grade. This is an amazing story. Now I get to go track down the rest of your stories and hope they're all this good.

Hey! I like this. I liked how you would keep repaeting words or phrases, it gives the words a rocking motion to match the rocking of Anne. The whole idea of the scalpel and then the brain surgery at the end, gave it an interesting twist. And of course, the split personality mad her seem really crazy, while the reader feels sympathey at the same time. Good job!

cool