Amazing simply amazing! Another wonderful story. Miss Andros, you've done it again! What a wonderful and amazing story. You should put all these wonderful stories you have written in a book. A short story book. You are an amazing author and in the time of 4 hours, in which I have read 3 of your stories, you are now my favorite author. You are above my past favorites, Anne McCaffrey, J.K. Rowling, and J.R.R. Tolkien. Your work is truly magnificent. Keep it up!, OH! And you should make a sequel to this, telling what happens to Kitara and Blaze.

This is excellent! I really wish that you'd continue with it, although looking at the date this was published, I doubt that will be happening. Oh well, these three chapters were absolutely amazing. I bow to your superior characterisation and excellent writing skills!