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| lilvalkrie 2003-02-28 ch 1, | abusea beautiful and deep poem. very calming and meditative. keep it up! Please be mindful that this not a haiku. haikus have 17 syllables only. |
| The Haiku Police 2002-01-11 ch 1, | abuseWe tried to read it, but we fell into a deep state of meditation and ran up our phone bill. Sorry. |
| KG 2001-11-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery mindful. I plan to use this when I mediate tommorrow. Thank you |
| anonymous 2001-11-20 ch 1, anon. | abusevery beautiful |
| Babsy Babes 2001-11-13 ch 1, | abuseFantastic haiku - I always find them really hard to write! Calming and strong. |
| people in english II 2001-11-05 ch 1, anon. | abusenot a haiku!!!!! |
| nekonomiko 2001-10-31 ch 1, | abuseThe haiku is a very relaxing read. I can feel the serenity it creates. Love it! |