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Reviews For: I love you, goodbye...

mjaw
2002-11-22
ch 1,
abuseaw, that's just too sad! I loved "an orbiting body not of your universe, but of another one, one incompatible"
and, of course
"I love you,
goodbye..."

A.M.L.
delkon
2001-11-06
ch 1,
abuseAnd I love you so much
That I would give you up
To see you happy.


Well, you captured in those few words, the way I feel about some of the people that I love. Good job! Like your poems! Please keep writing!
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