Whoa. That was like...a reallllly bad dream that I'm going to have tonight now...scary stuff Amina ;).

We thought that only one word could accurately describe this as we're both a bit gobsmacked with the style and thought that's been put into this [aka we weep with shame!] and that word is:

cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool

Hey, reading this with Chewie now as his computer still don't work properly, this is like, unlike anything I have read so far, it has true description and real emotions - must read next chapter! We have no will of our own...of our own...of our own...

Home at last but no time to sign in - cruelty! This looks cool so far, I'm thinking the possibility of time travel and quantum physics when I'm reading this! Mind if I tell the others about it?

this is brilliant, all the charactoprs are really good (they remind me of some people i know0
i now forgive you for not writing the latest chap of prted however now i shall apply double the preasure.

An interesting approach with the dream in the first chapter that keeps everyone wondering until everything gets clear in chapter 3. The story has distinct possibilities, but do try not to get into all the cliches of this particular sort of narrative (like some Arnold Schwarzenegger films, for example). - Now that's a review for this story, will you go on with "Parting" some time or other? Please do soon!!!

Oooooooooooooooh! I like this! it is so kool.... it must hav taken ages 2 fink of.... but den again u r a good riter.
luv,
Atalanta Zora