ohman your poems are gorgeous :D they are really good, i love the simplicity of the whole structure and stuff. i'm only reviewing one poem but this goes for all three :D

Amazing, outstanding. The rythm works so perfectly well, in pleasant contrast with the equally lovely free verse in the first part. Who would have connected laughter painting and musicality?

AWW that is the sweetest in the WORLD! love2u!

I find it difficult to believe only one person has reviewed this so far. This is one of the most romantic poems I've seen in some time. And once again, bravo on the imagery. Bravo on everything...

Wow. That is an amazing poem. So simple. So beautiful. I wish I could write things that were simple.