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| k-b-cook 2005-02-16 ch 1,  | abuseWow, This gives me an interesting feeling. I'm reading and it's all good like a nice dream and then I hit "they are warnings I'm failing to heed" and I think "woah! Did I miss something?" BIG double take... I like that. It makes the reader go back to analyze. Well done. Please return R&R if possible. Thanks! |
| Yelen 2001-12-24 ch 1, | abuseWow, very poignant, very powerful. I like it. |
| don't use this site anymore 2001-11-04 ch 1, | abusegorgeous gorgeous gorgeous |