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| Elij 2001-11-05 ch 1,  | abuseVery pointed and blunt. Excellent! |
| Catseye01 2001-11-04 ch 1, | abuseOooo... I liked the words you used alot... :) But like I said to many before... It doesnt quite flow to me. The point of the poem is straight out and clear... but its very blunt... not those kind of poems that are just smooth and gentle... But this one is really straight-forward... I really like it! |