Hahaha, I liked it. It was totally cute. Wow, the reviewers can get really harsh, it wasn't constructive but rather insulting. It's a rule in fictionpress that all reviews have to be constructive, not insulting! plus, i thought it rocked and they sucked. Love poems, I want to kill myself poems, I'm ugly poems and any thing along those lines can die because they are boring tripe that comes across as way whiney and annoying. I don't care if you want to kill yourself, if your boyfriend broke up with you or you have self esteem issues...It's not my problem and it's boring to read. So, I agree with you.

Oh yes, I really like it. I've added it to my favorites.. But you forgot to mention the ones where "waa boo hoo you broke up with me boo hoo so I went to kill myself, blah blah blah" other then that, yes.

I can see where you are coming from. It all depends on the poem though. I like the interesting love poems, the ones that make you think or feel good inside, not the ones that complain over and over again. There are so many poem on here that do just that, whether it's about love or hate or how much life quote "sucks". I used to write a lot of those...but I never really had a boyfriend to complain about! haha. I guess it's better that way. Anyway, I thought this was a fun little writing, especially the little comments that were thrown in there ^_^

It seems like you really dont' hate it, you're only "hating" it so you can create shock value. And Tiefling's right. It's not a poem. IT'S A **-FEST. Get over your lame self. Please. For the people of fictionpress.com.

I love it.. if people are goling to write something, might as well make it something real! your my new jesus by the way!

Well, i think love poems is too broad a category, i hate the really mushy ones (such as your examples) but sometimes it's ok i guess. I tend to avoid reading it, which is probably the best thing you can do because some strange people actually like it (*coughfreakscough*).

I found your poem rather amusing. Good Job

~Kiwi

all right!i totally agree with u there.i absolutely hate love poetry too.i'm about as anti-love as u can get.
hehe

its true
how true
well done

Well... I don't completely agree with you, but I know what you mean... when it gets extra mushy, and too descriptive.

Someone is a tad jealous methinks. This was not so much a poem as a whine.

I think love poems are the cooles and sweetes(some at lease) but I totally see where ur comin from and I tought it was funny. Beside you souldn't rate all poems according to its type.

I TOTALLY AGREE!!!!! i have love poems, they're just so...UGH boring. they should write about something fun, like cheese or spleens

hehehehehe, not my total feelings, but i do really HATE some of that mushy crap.sometimes its ok, but other times, ugh. i like yur poem! :)*