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| call me ish 2006-03-23 ch 1,  | abusewow |
| lizzers 2001-11-16 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was really great. |
| Mackenzie Anderson (n/s/i) 2001-11-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is an incredible story. You're awesome with describing her emotions and such. Very impressive. |
| Bitterscarlet 2001-11-11 ch 1, | abuseThis was great. It was easy to identify with the main character and I liked the addition of the guitar song at the end, it was pleasingly morbid and a nice departure as I was expecting a frenzied rush to the hospital. Nice descriptive passages and the quote at the beginning was quite profound. (I read your profile. Huzzah for Fiona Apple!) |