its a very good story...no joke
its very sad, and well writen...although the layout was a little confusing at first...maybe im just too tired

that's so sad! my god, that poor woman and her poor husband who didn't give up until the very last second! Oh my god, my heart just ached for them. you have a good way of bringing out emotion in your writing which is great, in my opinion. wow. i mean, oh god the way you described the hope in the husband's eyes and the way the little boy couldn't understand my god it was so heart wrenching! I wanted to cry for them all! so very good but so very painful. keep writing.
Arrian

Lovely Job, I adore your way with words, please continue!

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