good job

Very nice...and this comes from a fellow song writer. I kno how u feel. Beautiful composition and good rhythm and flow. *claps* me likey

That was so sad, but really good. I know what that's like. I had (I think I still do, I'm not sure) a crush on my best friend. Then he told me he was gay and I was lost for a few days. He only slightly knows I like him now but were still best friends which helps. Again, nice job.

Beautiful. Sad, haunting and bittersweet. A lovely but saddening read.

!~* Noell *~!

I think I'll just curl up and die now. That was so sad. OMG. I hate you, and I love you, and I hate you, but mostly I love you. I'm gonna die now. Bye.

Alex

This is so good!! I wish my poems were half as heart-felt as yours. I know how you feel though... that kind of happened to me a couple of times. Anyway, I absolutely love it. What more can I say?

Its sad!! :crying: *wonderfully delightful though*

heh...you think that's hard? Try it the other way around, being gay and in love with a friend. Ak! But anyways, good poem...strong emotions.

thats sad.but dont feel bad.when he told u he was gay, did u feel offended?(b/c he was attracted to guys than u)lovely poem

now this was beaautiful too, as is most of yuor work- except for the last paragraph, i would have left it there. THis reminds me of me and my friend Rob- 'cept i will never tell him how i feel cuase i'm such a coward and afraid to get hurt...

It's funny cuz I feel the same way about my friend Mario