First of all iggity spiggity, absolutely brilliant! i love your work your poetry is wonderful, i've even added a few to my favourites list. Keep up the good work!

when told not to do something i must do it but am glad to have (nothing bit me this time). cool how it seem to have come unplanned like natural peotry wrote on impulse deffinitly ot bad or stupid.

Saying it was stupid got me to read it. Course now I'm going to tell you to change that. But that is why I read it. I liked it. I know what you mean. Life sux then you die. But if your lucky you got people that will prevent you from making it happen sooner. And if your not lucky. Look me up.

...this was exactly my mood the last two days, but i recently got over it- due to poetry. I'm only ever a poet when i'm depressed, and last night it just wouldn't come out. It was after a long period of art class (watercolours are the devil) where my talent refused to dribble either, that and stupid Ky was calling me stupid. (i get so down when i create something ugly, or when people insult my intelligence.)I'll be truthful though, not your best- which is mean because it's based on your emotions, which it's so chockful of and redeems anything less than perfection- i usually would try something like this in free verse.
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bleh. I fight a lot with my parents (or used to...) Anyway, I like this poem.