I think it's really cool how you wrote it backwards!

I like. Very inspirational and sweet.

Very nice. Interesting how you had it read up like that, but I enjoyed it. You had a very nice rythm in it, good job! .

I agree that the reading up is quite cool, but it sounds like... well, a strange, overly-protective distant relative reciting the family tree.

What a wonderfully written poem. I like it. I like it because it relates one, to everything. It's beautiful.

...Trippy.

::snaps her fingers, a-la beatniks::

I'm not quite sure i understood that... but anyhoo... it WAS well written. Short sweet. I don't know why, but I liked it. it had rythm.

Deep stuff. ::nods:: Very nice writing. I like your use of contrasting images. Good job.

Slightly odd, but I like it. Cool how it reads up.