Wow....that was AWESOME!!!!!!!! You rock! ^_~

I know one review isn't going to turn a lot of heads, but to those of you considering reading this I strongly urge it. This was an excellent and (most importantly) creative story. (Although you certainly are a romantic, Abi!) HOWEVER, some of the dialogue nearing the climax was just a bit too sticky and cliched for my tastes. Of course Lord knows one of my stories got similar reviews, so we've both been there. It certainly makes me want to sample some of your other works. You did a wonderful job.