COOL!!! I like it well done, too bad you can't write more... or can you?

OMG!! I loved this story it was so good it's definitly one of those stories that it was so good that it leaves you speechless. I hope everything turns out okay for Elliot and Catt waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh I loved this story so much !!!!

Great story! I liked the characters, and the Oceandome sounded nice. I liked the whole "mad scientist" thing. And over population is something that could happen to us. I wish there could be more to the story.

I'm impressed. You're an excellent writer, and though the length is...well, intimidating, to say the least, it's definitely worth the read. Nice!