this is good

Sweet story, truly enchanting. Just like you're regular style.

Adorable story.

Some kind of epilog maybe? That portray a few months into the future? Were it really three girls? How did the boutique go? Etc. Or the wedding maybe? That could be a good one too. That is what I can come up with as missing parts to tie the knot. I have read four of your stories I think, and I know I will read all of them. The ones I have read could probably be published if you made them longer, get more into detail about things the characters are only told about. And try to write more, but not so much dialogue. So go get them published girl, you could do it like they are now also! *hugs* Good luck!

Wow that was a really nice story. Really sweet.

I loved this story..just like i love all of your other stories too lol keep up the good work!

hmm. . I love all of your stories! ;o)

You said in the end to let you know what is missing. Maybe you could have the wedding or the babies birth, or let us know if Gordon sets up the company there with Tori. This story is awesome.

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AAAAWWWWWW! This story is so sweet! I love it! . . . But you aren't gonna end it like that are you? Hope not! Anyhow, keep up the good work. I've read all of your stories now except for one, I think. Love em!:)

i love this story and all your others too. but thius one was so sweet

great story, you're an excellent writer.

i'm totally completely in love with your characters. they are so romantic. so sweet.

Wow! I'm reading all your stories gradually, and they seem to get better with each one I read, keep up the good work! Love it!

good stuff. Interesting shipper between the two characters. Anyway, i really like your stories alot and i hope you write soon.

It's perfect sus, you don't need to add anything to it

Oh me god! I can't believe you only had one review for this! It is the best story I have ever read on this site. Sure, it needs a bit of polishing up, and a few more details and a extra added, but it is an incredible story. The plot is great, the characters are real, it is well thought out and developed the whole way throughout, and the ending is perfect. Congratulations. I loved it, and now I'm off to read some more of your work. If it is all this good I am going to be very happy.