Holy **, that was the most disturbing piece of literature I have ever read. There is no reason that anyone should ever do that to themself, and you've captured it perfectly.

Oh.. So very good. I love the ending. Its a great story. I like the description.
Azy

very good...and dark and agnsty, the way I like 'em!

Love In Vein-

Excellent start. You must continue.

Ooh, I like this. So dark and very well-written.

I LOVED THAT!!!! make it longer!!

this is really interesting. well written, and i liked it a lot. i liked the detail you used, and how so much is left unanswered. as in, who is he? but, that's a good thing..