 hiding behind amber eyes 2005-02-24 . chapter 1Wow. I liked the list of emotions and such. I enjoyed the dragon and ghost concept, keep writing!
ps-you profile thing was interesting. (Yes, i did understand lol) |
 kristhegreat 2004-12-27 . chapter 1Whoa... this is really different, I love it! The use of just the one word per line is very effective, and the whole poem has a nice flow to it... and so much feeling. Wow. Amazing... |
 little red line 2004-02-24 . chapter 1Nice flow.Nice use of words.Your right.Even something painful is better than nothingness. |
 Black Dragon4 2002-05-21 . chapter 1DRAGONS! |
 Ragdoll 2001-11-24 . chapter 1Hey Nat... promise me you'll come and find that dragon yeah? It's 2.41am I'm at a party and I'm stoned.. some thing don't change! That poem was beautiful like all your poems. I think about you loads and I miss you very, very much. If I could see you now I'd give you a big hug and tell you it's all gonna be Ok... because it IS believe me. Keep your faith and keep your hope Nat. When will I hear from you? I 'll be patient for you and trust God to take care of you.. love always - A dragon somewhere over that horizon who's waiting for you xXxXx |