truely a great job. i am very impressed with your string of questions. keep it up.

Poetry's not your thing either

i really like that poem.. it made me think :-)... (it takes a lot to get me thinking...)

I love your poem it makes me think it has good comparisons... it reminds me of one I wrote they ask a few of the same questions... but those questions in that keep me up all night long thinking and i like things that make me think... write more of this sort of stuff... you probably have I will check it out

Hm...yes, I like it. This one stirs a lot of questions and makes one ponder upon life topics, wot? Well, the old chap must be off! Tally ho!

...I like it. I've always had a passion for poetry, and this one really is nice. Plus, plays on words are spiffy; i.e. "...or does true love find you?" Yes, I definately have a liking to this one.

Just a little sidenote for a reviewer of your's, as well... it's amazing how idiotic some people can be, 'Bob'. I managed to comprehend it quite well; it's basically just questions about life, that have no immediate answers, and the entity that watches over them feeling pain as they ignore him. If you dislike it, why not try to 'right' a poem of your own, eh? I wonder why it is that flamers never sign in... *Ponder*

This was good, Poetry's something I personnaly enjoy it goes deep. I have found myself asking many of the same question that you have written here. I enjoyed this poem although I could not decide whether it nmade me happy or sad so I guess you could say it left my already overactive imagination feelin thoughtful. Not a lot of people understand poetry or take the time to read and write it which I feel is quite sad :( because sometimes it can be soooooooo good for the mind.

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Wow! What a beautiful poem! I thought it was very well written! (nice meter and rhyming, I don't see that much anymore . . .) I loved the question about destiny leading us one way while our heart leads to the other. Ain't that the truth?!? :)

ok ummmm first off this does not make any friggin sense ok?my kid sis could right a three worded poem better than this load of Crap!!!!!!!!

That was sad but very moving! i wounder if i will ever feel true love or just be a lonly person my whole life? anyways great job! i loved it! it has all the ? i want answered preety much in it!

wow this poem is beautful....really meaningful. i can tell you put alot into this poem, it shows. greta job. you know this makes me think of the vietname war, when all those boys were going and dying,even when it wasnt their fight. so sad. like why did that have to happen? why did it happen? same with world war 2, why were the jews targetted and no one else? why were the jews kicked out of their houses, when they were the same, if some not better, than others? why did so many die when they deserved none of it? and why did god allow this horrible things to happen? why? because it is a lesson...a very wonderful, meaningful lesson that we, even in the future, will treasure for cemturies, generations to come. that is the circle of life.

Oh wow! All those questions made my head hurt... in a good way! If that makes any sense... Go you, this poem is absolutely SPIFFING! Are you gonna use it in your poetry project?! I would if I were you.. cause it ROCKS MY WORLD! Wowwie.... *blinks at screen in awe*