Know this feeling all too well, I love the repitition and the shortness of all the lines, it makes it all the more powerful

Good job, but you might consider capitalizing your i's.

I'd have to agree. I was worried there for a minute. Were you listening to that song at the time? I know one of my poems has the lyrics to a song in it but that was intended. Good though, almost brings me back a few months.

I wonder how many poems i read!

Like em' ALL

stay [sic]

SiC CHiCK

Not bad, but you have so pinched some of those words... (sounds worryingly like the Garbage song '#1 Crush' from the Romeo and Juliet soundtrack)