wow... sad but heartfelt and touching... but still sad.. good short story, something that can easily be made into a movie or something... true

No, no! That was not good! I mean, the story was good, it was great, but the end...I want to know what happens! This is so sad...I want to see who loses their hearing first! Oh my gosh, this is one of the saddest things I've ever read...Good job. I need a tissue.

Oh... *sniff* That's so sad... But beautiful, I love it. Lots of sad loe type stories I read always end up sounding really cheesy, but you managed to pull this one off. Great job! I can't wait to read more of your work.

OMG WHAT HAPPENED?! did she die. sigh sniffle.
Good story it passed 15 minutes of my life like it was nothing. i got the point of story when he started talking about the old man who was being wheeled in. i was "like" O ok. im not to sure what to say but it sounds like a song =) u know the one where he wants this girl but hes with another one. O good story sorry im a critique virgin so dont pay attention to me. =(

this was a great chapter, can't wait to read more...

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