Very very sad mood of this poem, very good! You are one to give a good poem!!I love this part:Hearts are weeping, so coldfrozen, faintly beating

Veyr good piece of work or art!! Keep it up as I said manby times before!

Heheheh, I liked you summary!! That's basically how I feel. I'm too young to have... feelings... seriously. You know, I just wanted to stick to my make-believe characters like Tobais the red tail and Piccolo the saucy Namek. What did I get, though? I've fallen head over heels for a really sweet guy who says he loves me, even if I've only talked to him on the internet. ~Sweatdrops~ D'OH!!! Behold: the stresses of being hormonal in my teen years. ~Sigh~ Kind of wish we could all be on ice at one point or another.
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Anyway, 'tis a lovely poem!! Very, very good. Deep and meaningful.

These poems are really good. I bet you could make songs out of them. I mean like adding music to them. You know what I mean! Anyway, they're really good!

this is your best