interesting, very thought inducing.

Oh... a powerful poem, you had caught into this with the very first word and I love how you end your poems with a blast!! :)

Fireworks (your endings) I say... you are very good at poems...

very good. very very good. mostlike much better then mine are.

~Blinks~ Huh.. that'll make ya think.
MTrunks: It's supposed to make you think, Kitt.
Me: It is?
MTrunks: ... Duh.
Me: Oh.. well, it made me think!!
MTrunks: Good for you! I'm so proud!!
Me: Really!?
MTrunks: ... No. ~Bangs head against a wall~
Me: ~Blink blink~ Um... but ya... made me think!
MTrunks: ~Thud Thud Thud~
Me: I liked it!

cool, & no I would not!

"Would you lie to me?" would i lie to myself? Good poem i enjoyed it. ~neri-chan

I knowmy reviews are short but I really do like your work.