I love this poem... epseciall the last part. Very good poem!! Love it!! Keep it up!!

this was really poetic. i really liked it. ^_^ great job!

~SP

A lovely poem, short and sweet and easy to read but with so much meaning. I like the last stanza especially. I'm glad you kept it like this without elaboration.

much koolness. I justed loved the flow of it!!

wow. the rythm was a most comfortable flow from each part to the next...and so short a poem so full of meaning is such a joy to read. good job.

It screamed freedom... I like your writting