Very Nice rhyming Scheme! I loved it! Shadow H3art The Clone! Check some of my stuff!

Oh.. I love this... it's beautiful... you're very good at writing poems, eh? I have a few poems and stories too.

I love this part:

together, you and meforver, after eternity

AWWWW!! So sawEEET! ~Smiles innocently~ Oh hey, sorry for mistaking you as a guy in my Evil Pickle Jar Chronicles thing. ^_^** (Oopsie) Really, I should have known that you were female...! And I couldn't email you or anything 'cause I'm not allowed to send emails to people I don't personally know anymore. -_-** Bleck! Anywho, though, coo poem! T'was really sweet, dude! Er.. dudette... ~Sweatdrops~

That's a pretty good poem.Better than any I've ever wrote.Keep up the good work and keep writing forever!

Truly great. It makes me think of a couple with blue and black hair...hmmmm...who could that be?

I liked it. It was very good.