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| mystikwolfguardian 2004-02-04 ch 1, anon. | abuse(i write in fanfiction.com for the anime ^^ but im going to make a fictionpress account under the same name ^^) such a nice angsty poem xD i was checkingout your other story 'Demon Awakening' and its really good, and i read your profile...gotta love anime/rpg cant live without em ;] great story so far for Demon Awakening and amazing poem ^^ |
| The Rain Child 2002-10-28 ch 1, | abuseif u luv poetry, read mine, and if u request, i'll upload all my others! urs is real good |
| Loriena 2002-10-01 ch 1, | abuseYes, you guessed it... I'm about to say, "You STILL have lots of potential!" And I'm dead serious. Now I feel like I'm a horrible author compared to you :P Oh well. No more self-sympathy. Yes, this is a very, very good poem. Really good. It's so... saddening. Goodiness (another made-up word), it's good. And sad, of course. I'm glad I read this poem, because it's exactly the truth. I mean, look at all the poverty going on around us today! The Middle East, and all that stuff... *sniff* Potential!!! P-O-T-E-N-T-I-A-L!!!! Remember that. If you come up with a really good poem you should send it in to somewhere to get published, methinks. |
| Lise-chan! 2002-09-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis would make a spiffy song. Well not exactly spiffy, more depressing, but still...I thought of Karl singing when I read this. (Koneko-chan-I'll explain at school exact image cos it's cool) (write JB or a large book will fall on your head) ^^ |
| EclipseKlutz 2002-05-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was (sniff) so sad, and good, and.. (sniff) .. and... and... true. Your right, no one can predict the future, someone's gonna suffer and all those other things (sniff). I've read about two other poems made by you, and I agree with your friends, your a good poet (and fic writer) |
| AnimeQueen 2002-01-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery good poem ^_^ I think you should write more poetry. Your a good poet and you can only get better. Good luck (ps)...i usually don't read anybody else's poems but i'm glad i read yours ^_^ don't get discouraged and keep on trying |
| empty account 2001-12-08 ch 1, | abusevery nice, you are a good poet. |
| NinjaRage 2001-12-05 ch 1, | abuseexcellent.I liked it alot.U should read phantom12`s poetry too.Keep writng! |