aww its so beautiful, and paints such a beautiful picture, sadly I remember a place like this...but only in my dreams

awwww that is so good

Did you Really write that is was amazing! Its so sweet, and romantic- I love romance! Pity I can't seem to find- but my dreams insire me so....

Sailor Lita
-your fan

Wow this is just too good (I do really mean it) ^-^

You reviewed me so I figured that I would return the favor... I bet you get this a lot but you are amazing! I am very impressed! BTW, Cannon in D... good choice (that would be my favorite!) Keep it up!

such a sweet poem about what seems to have been the perfect night... hope it turned out for the better and not the worse

A nice play of words, and a very nice rhythm to the whole story. The lack of punctuation probably helps that. The allusion to Canon is also... a very conscious decision that works real well with the theme of the poem.