I love this story! I twas soo beautiful and sad, but with a happy ending! I'm so gla Aia got to be with Thaelin! yayz! Your story just completed my life!!

Amazing woonderful tearful beautiful .
just amazing,you have tallent .

*sniffs*

this was a wonderful chapter and i really cant wait for the next chapter. *sniff*

Please update. I want to know what happen to Aia and Thaelin. Do they fall in love with each other. Please update.

This is so beautiful! Very Amazing Writing.

Great oneshot, keep up the good work.

Amazing story. I like the part about the king getting what Aia had done to him done!!
Lee

Wow...thank you so much for writing this. I find it very refreshing to read such wonderful work from people who are so talented like you.

Donna...

I began reading this story early this morning and thought about it all day until i could come home and read the rest of it. It's truly amazing and so unbelievably sad. I adore it though, it's beautifully written. Thank you.

that is so lovely, the king's atitude is the best! I like men with this type of character, make them really manly. Strong and kind, what else could a woman as for more?

Anyway I will continue reading the next chapter!

This story is simply beautiful. It warms your heart that Aia is finally freed.

Gosh, that was good.

I love your description and use of colors and imagery. The way you wrote had a wonderful cadence that accented the dark tone of the story. I liked all of the contrast too.

I'd say you passed with flying colors in your goal to have a mute character communicate and do so in a one of a kind way.

Seriously. This is an amazing piece you've got here.

-Nub

That was a beautiful story. I enjoyed the way you used desciptive details to make the images and scenes seem more vivid and realistic. I like how characters are completely original and your own. You truely hold a wonderful talent in writing and I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future.

! This story was so beautiful... It almost made me cry.

Great job. I'm looking forward to seeing a sequel (PLEASE!). :)

I love your style and how you displayed Aia's emotions. XD really touching XD