what's the results? Oh i hope you won! I entered an essay contest as well, long ago.

I like what you wrote it's so prestigious and welcoming to all nationality plus i hope this world of ours come to a peace agreement

Your essay rocks!

my pediatric rheumatologist

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You lost me XD

Your essay was very good. Did you win by the way? I really like the part about Dr. James Lawrence! I hope you're not in any pain now. Your dedication actually made me cry it was so beautiful.

oooo this is good, hope u get to take it to state

This is GOOD!! It should be LONGER!!!! I need more!!! MOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!! I hope you kick-butt at state!!!!!!!