Ahm...shouldn't the title say 'Ein Zartes Bluemchen'?

But a great poem.

Oooh, wow... what can I say to explain how much I liked that...? And that I REALLY appreciated your review of my poem? Unglaublich! Red Baron fans unite. Take cover everyone! :)

*shakes head in admiration* I wish I could write as well as you do! Oh, and thanks for the reviews :). Again, this is a really great poem...the symbolism (ack, however you spell it!) is so vivid and the poem really breathes (as corny as that sounds...) with imagry

I really liked this poem. I'm a big fan of the Manfred Von Richthofen (the Red Baron)

and I think that this poem really captures the mood of war, and the feeling of watching friends die.

Keep up the good work.