Aw, really cute story you have there. Creative idea/plot, too. Though, I thought the resolution between the two sisters was abrupt and came a bit too quick...You could written longer and explained more things...but that's ok(it was meant for something like a one-shot right?). It was still a good story to read. Very sweet (If you have time or you're bored one day, want to make a sequel or prequel?- that would be awesome) Anyway, great story, good job on this! bravo^^

aw. this is so cute. the only thing that bugs me is that it's a tad unrealistic, especially the ending- the younger sister doesn't sound like her age when she talks. and also, faith seems to melt too quickly and has a complete turnaround without much of a trial. however, this is really sweet and i like it a lot. great work.

Not bad. Short , but good!

This was really, really good! You should send it to Cairnsy at cairnsynz@yahoo.com for to see if it will get published. Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, say you'll do that! Please!

That was so touching! That is kinda like me and my sister :) I was gunna cry if the story continued!!! OMG! I loved it!!! *tears*

Great job. It's very...moving... It might be me, but I see a lot more fanfiction giving lessons to people, I wrote a poem about a cutter, Lady Kido wrote something about drunk driving, and you write something about domestic abuse. Keep it up, great job! Maybe other people will learn from these lessons we're giving out.