Well, if this was the first poem you wrote with any meaning behind it then I'd say you've definately improved..it's not, amazing (don't want to sound harsh). It's nice but it just doesn't have the real flow to it (and that's not because it doesn't rhyme)..I don't know what it is, perhaps it's because I've never been in love like that..don't know.
I like the ending though :)

Great poem, Me likie it.

I liked it. Poetry is awesome. The hyphens (sp?) after the first to lines give it motion.