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Reviews For: A Walk in the Park.
Dragonclaws 2002-09-22 . chapter 1
Cute! :)
eden 2002-09-10 . chapter 1
Ooot, that's cool ^_^
Constructivre critism:
~Too many "currently"s in the first two paragraphs...
~some gramar/spelling errors, not too much (yay! Chiad uses spell check!)
~the last sentance is confusing. It should be in "..." even if it is a thought...
I love it though. It's really cool ^_^
JaiElyria 2002-08-15 . chapter 1
awwwwwwww! they're so cute!!! *restrains self from begging for another chapter*
Neko Tatsutahime 2002-02-10 . chapter 1
KAWAII!! Any chance of another chapter?
Ivy Shingles 2001-12-12 . chapter 1
Hi hi ^_^ I think your lil story is adorable! hehe I do! -nodnod-
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