Whyhaven't more people reviewed this? It's absolutely wonderful! It gives a new take on the characters, particularly Persephone, and I adore it.

Excellent story! I really wished that there was a little more with Hades, but nevertheless it was great.

Great story! I loved how Persephone's perception of the underworld changes. From black to color. Amazing! Please write more.

Absolutely enchanting! I love this myth so much. Great work. Now all I need to do is improve my writings and maybe, just maybe, I'd be as good as you _

nice write.

I really enjoyed your take on this! I love the new elements you added - the prophecy idea was very classy and added a great twist to it all! Also, I really like how you had Persephone want to stay with Hades at the end; this is my favourite myth and I always thought these two loved each other...

This was a splendid story to read, especially since I'm halfway in love with the myth of Persephone and Hades, anyway. I love your version of it and how she made the Underworld light up and how she wanted to stay with Hades after all. Very clever.

Very nicely done Myriad! I look forward

to much more!

Awesome awesome story! It was so vibrant and descriptive. I'd write more but I have to go back and read it again! :) - TW

Welcome to , Myriad! And congrats on a well-done inagural tale. Such vivid imagery, lush descriptions, credible dialogue construction... It was hard not to feel like I was there! Bravo!

Gives a classic a new perspective, gives Persephone a nickname, and the vivid imagery is wonderful. I like.