pleaese update =(

Oh please update, it would be such a shame to leave such a great story unfinished, and right with cliffhanger too.

cool

ABSOLUTELY AMAZING

how could you not have updated in so long?
its such a great story, you are a great writer i might add

amazing story.

oh my!
hurry hurry, more!
fab story!
Midge

I can't even say short and sweet - coz it's not really sweet at all. It's a welcome update nonetheless.

My gosh, another cliffhanger. You know, this could be considered a form of torture.

Ow, now what? Jerry's going to be fine right...you know you don't need to prove to us readers how much Jerry means to Kim by shooting him or such bull:p. We know she loves him and she all ready admitted it too so that's enough!- don't hurt Jerry!! Good writing and plot development. Keep on moving.

Thank you! It remains a cliff-hanger, but at least we know you're still alive (and so is Jerry...). I can't wait to see what happens!

Wow! It contains so much suspense! I'm looking forward to see what happens to Jeremy!

Oh my gosh! I hope you continue this story cause this cliffhanger is killing me. Wow, it's a great story and I never suspected that Ray would be a police officer! And oh my gosh, Jerry! That character is so loveable. I hope all goes well and that you update soon!
Keep up the great work!

I really like this story!

Please, update this story soon! I hope you aren't abandoning it...I saw on your blog where you said you were working on writing again...could you please let us know which stories to expect to be updated? I'm also really interested in "Unfinished Business"--such a great story! I hope you aren't stricken by writer's block again!