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Reviews For: When the Wolves Run
voices untold 2006-06-25 . chapter 1
wow. hehe yeah you captured the true feel of a wolf pack while together. though of course there is the deep meaning that all of your poems seem to have. great job!
Azreal Shaw 2004-02-10 . chapter 1
Wolves are so cute! You did a really nice job describing how they are!
Black Dragon4 2002-05-19 . chapter 1
YAY for the wolves! I love wolves. Good metaphor.
Deia Shanti 2001-12-24 . chapter 1
I'm speechless. You're very talanted. Your ability to grip the reader's attention and emotions with words is amazing. I've added you to my favourite authors.
Ragdoll 2001-12-15 . chapter 1
It's 5.32am Sunday morning and one wolf is tired but happy. You sure you weren't there?? The writing i just so accurate I love it. This is seriously good (as usual). I can see myself reading this over and over in the future. Check out the wolves at http:\www.indymedia.net (I hope but the site changes all the time anyway! A finr tributr to one of the most liberating weekends of my life. *yawn* let sleeping dragons lay :o) love you..
gasoline rainbows 2001-12-13 . chapter 1
I can really feel the emotion in this. The wolf anaolgy is superb. Maybe that's because I know what you're referring to. He told me he'd be there last time I heard form him. The rhyming is very fluid. And your rythm evokes, in my mind anyway, the beat and rythm and pace etc of a running wolf. About the illustrations - It would be wonderful if you would do that. I read your review of Down the Rabbit Hole and I'm excited to see that one too. Be sure and tell me when you put the page up!
some one 2001-12-13 . chapter 1
Hunters may come
But they cannot aim
Tonight the Wolves
Fight with one claw
Their fangs unite
To form one jaw

Loved that part. and my support to the demonstrators in Brussels. specially that person you wish no harm.
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