   Endless Nightmares 2004-04-07 . chapter 6Hello-
heh, it happens. I'll be glad to read and review the other one too. |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-04-07 . chapter 5 Hello-
Nice word choice within the chapter. You described things nicely. Your characters are crafted up nicely. Dakar seems like a very dark person. EMotionally disturbed maybe. |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-04-07 . chapter 4 Hello-
Great job. I iwsh there was more to read. |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-04-07 . chapter 3 Hello-
The story is getting more interesting, because I want to keep reading more. Your writing is just really good. |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-04-07 . chapter 2 Hello-
Pretty cool chapter. Dakar is a very angry person. |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-04-07 . chapter 1 Hello-
Well I must say, this is quite a nicely written story so far. This was really good. Keep up the great work.
Strive for the best. |
 Sekai no Hikari 2004-02-20 . chapter 2This is a good fic. I feel bad for Dakar. He has such typical parents, too. That don't help much. ^^ |
 Shawna 2003-06-19 . chapter 5 Very impressive, can't wait to read the next chapter. |
| Teagan 2002-04-02 . chapter 5 Wow! this is really good! I (and all the little voices in my head) really liked it. Please continue it soon!
BTW, how old is Dakar? 16? 17? |
| Antiprep Superstar 2002-01-18 . chapter 5 wow. this is awesome. continue please! |
| Antiprep Superstar 2002-01-18 . chapter 5 wow. this is awesome. continue please! |
| Agent Green 2002-01-15 . chapter 1 Good horror fic.Keep it up. If you get a chance could you read and review Shadows In The Night.Sorry to ask. |
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