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Rocket62204 2006-08-24 . chapter 8
*grin* So hot. Great job! ^_^
Rocket62204 2006-08-24 . chapter 1
I'm adding this to my favorites because it sounds interesting, I'll finish reading and review later. *Kiss*
Inuko Metallium 2006-04-19 . chapter 1
do not listen to the people who do not like chara summaries. I did summaries on some of my stories because the charas are usually too complicated for some people to keep track of. personally, i think all the characters sound lovely and i can't wait to read on about what happens to them. Power to you.
Morcirith 2006-02-17 . chapter 2
eh...i didn't read past the character bios. if you need character bios, that means you are not skilled enough to write in a way so that people can figure out your characters' personalities. also, if you can sum up a character in one word, like 'goth' or 'bisexual', that's not a very interesting or 3D one at all.
Lioness Black 2004-01-24 . chapter 2
I honestly couldn't read anymore, as much as I wanted to. The centered formatting was terribly annoying. And then there's the thing with the character summaries.
Your characters should not have to be summarized. You should be able to let the reader get to know them through the course of the story, and not in a different part. And on top of it all, if you do that, you end up keeping your characters in a box, without any room to grow.
Believable Facade 2003-06-11 . chapter 8
Has anyone ever told you guys that you have to much free time? And that humanising your instruments is a serious sign of "band nerd ism" which I am also afflicted with. ::looks at Monkey aka the bass clarinet:: I liked it it amused me!
eatfoodyum 2002-08-24 . chapter 7
wow...I liiiiiiiked it! That was great. Miranda sounds like a good screw, even though im not into the masochism/sadism thing...:D write more?
Casey Greene 2001-12-21 . chapter 8
innnnnteresting..... if slightly confusing. the char. summaries are still in code, you (collective) will probably want to fix that, and you may wish to consider putting that as the first chapter-thing. writing the story centered was a little hard to read. but it was good, once i started to "get" it. more?
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