 Comatose phtotgraph 2004-11-03 . chapter 1 Wow I applaude this peice, wonderful. truly wonderful. I'm sure your tired of hearing people say that. |
 Scarlet Starfire 2004-01-01 . chapter 1wow |
 DIEDELETED 2003-09-22 . chapter 1Great repeating verse. Makes a bunch of sence if you can think that deep... |
 Black Dragon4 2002-05-19 . chapter 1i like it. it almost seems romantic. *tear* very good. |
 Ragdoll 2002-01-10 . chapter 1What did I do to deserve this? It's so sweet it brings a kinda dumb smile to my face (visualise it and laugh). Thanks so much I dunno what to say about thjis one. Look we're soulmates and I know when I get hurt it hurts you so I'm gonna take care and it works the other way round too so you loook out! Thanks for being there. You don't know how much difference you made/make, think about that next time you beat yourself up (mentally or physically)... thanks again *hugs* :o) |
 gasoline rainbows 2002-01-03 . chapter 1Lyrically rhythmic and the words seem to turn in on themselves and loop in beautiful expressions. Truly heartfelt and deep. This is another one of my favorites in your writing. |
 Bitterscarlet 2001-12-27 . chapter 1Here I am again. (You'll never get rid of me) Another series of excellent images. There's so much fantasy in your writing and I love it. Is this for your Dragon? *cue 'awwww' sound* Well done once again. |
 Deia Shanti 2001-12-24 . chapter 1Beautiful...and strong. I truly loved this piece of poetry. Wonderfully written. |